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Postscript: Camp NaNoWriMo

With all the excitement post-Conflux, I’ve ended up almost forgetting to wrap up the big challenge for April — Camp NaNoWriMo. The target was 25,000 words in 30 days, and once again I was on schedule — ahead of schedule, actually, with around 21,500 words written with a week to go — when I hit a story block.

No, not “writers block”, per se. I knew where I wanted to go to reach the end of this novel, but I had many debates with myself as to which route I should take to get there.

Then of course there was Conflux itself, which took me out of action for five days. I daresay had I known what I wanted to write, I might have squeezed out some writing time and hit the 25K mark (maybe more), but as it happened I was happy enough to leave the WIP for a bit in the hope my subconscious might figure something out.

A total of 32 hand-scrawled pages later in my trusty writing journal, I finally figured out yesterday what should happen next. So today I got back into it and flung some words down after more than two weeks of pondering. I might only have the next three scenes figured out, but once they’re done I’m hoping the next segment will reveal itself.

The end feels so near, it’s hugely exciting. But still a few weeks away, I think.

Camp NaNoWriMo proved an excellent means of keeping tabs on myself during the month. I really like the community feeling of keeping pace with other writers, even if the “Camps” don’t have nearly the same level of energy as the November real deal. But simply having a place to log my words is really helpful — I really should resume logging my word outputs in a spreadsheet to see if that’s all I need.

How do others deal with obstacles in their creative process? Lots of brainstorming on paper as I do — or do you have some other proven method? Also, does logging your output help with productivity? I’d really like to know.


Camp NaNoWriMo update — with Mr Tickle

As Camp NaNoWriMo hits the halfway mark, I too find myself at pretty much exactly half my target number of words for the month. That is: 12.5 out of 25K.

OK, I might have kept writing tonight until I reached that point, might even have thrown in an extra paragraph at the end to stack on those last 50 words, but who knows from where and when the little gems will come?

I’m finding Camp NaNo rather more civilised than November’s 50K real deal. Half the target is far more achievable and sustainable for me. It’s a much more comfortable pace, even if the writing itself isn’t much better. (But I’m not stressing about that while I’m in Messy First Draft phase.)

At this point, however, I don’t think I’m going to close out the novel in the remaining 12.5K words — as declared before Camp NaNo commenced. The options are therefore to 1) accept the MFD won’t be finished this month, or 2) write more words! Up the anti! Wordsling until my fingers fall off and my brain dribbles out my ears!

I’d like to go for option 2 (who needs fingers and a brain anyway?), but I do have a convention to attend in a week’s time, which might prove distracting… Nonetheless, let’s see how I go.

For inspiration, I’m going to throw in Mr Tickle!

I have long loved Mr Tickle, and find myself acquiring Mr Tickle merchandise from time to time — most recently the coolest coffee mug you ever saw. And then there’s this fantabulous cushion I’ve had for years (which sits in my line of vision every night as I tap away at this keyboard). And have you ever read the story of Mr Tickle and the dragon?

Mr Tickle is my inspiration of the week. He’s going to help me storm through to the end of this MFD and complete Camp NaNoWriMo. And if I falter, he’s going to… er, tickle me until I get there!

Yay for Mr Tickle. Who’s your favourite Mr Man?

 


On the eve of Camp NaNoWriMo

2013-Participant-CampNaNoTomorrow is April 1st and that means . . . the beginning of Camp NaNoWriMo! My official plan is to write 25,000 words in 30 days.  Maybe more.

My actual plan is to complete the messy first draft of of my current novel-in-progress.

I’m poised on the brink of the last act, the final descent into mayhem and madness. But there are so many balls in the air that I feel somewhat paralysed. I so desperately want to catch them all the first time round, although I know it doesn’t really matter if I drop one . . . I can always pick it up later.

It doesn’t feel a natural way for me to write, this acceptance of mess and holes and careless writing. But I do think it’s working. It’s forcing me to keep moving forward to find the story, to get it down on the page rather than agonising over every little thing including scenes that will ultimately be deleted or altered beyond recognition.

I’ve read a few posts recently about how important it is to block out that inner editor — to allow the subconscious mind to do its thing. And my subconscious mind has been coming to the party. I love the little gems that sometimes drop out spontaneously when I shut down my left brain. Although I allow my left brain to plan and scheme and roughly outline, I try to switch it off for the wordslinging so my right brain can run wild.

Sometimes (often) I doubt my ability to realise my vision of this novel. I have so many notes about things to work on in the revision that this messy first draft seems little more than a skeleton. Little more than a jumble of bones that I’m still digging out of the ground.

But I love the revision process — love layering up the story and characters and setting and dialogue like a papier mache model. That’s when the story starts to sing. So I’m excited by the thought of  completing the first draft in April and moving on to that next phase.

I think 25K words should just about do it!

Fellow writers: How do you feel as you hurtle towards the end of a novel — fear, exhilaration, or a mixture of both? Do you look forward to revision as much as I do? 

 


Packing for Camp NaNoWriMo

2013-Participant-CampNaNoAfter my positive experience during NaNoWriMo last November (when I wrote a stack of words on my WIP) I’m now considering signing up for Camp NaNoWriMo.

Yep.

It can all happen again in April and/or July — the word slinging, the discipline, the moral support from the writing community. This time we have the flexibility to nominate our own word targets (I’ve gone for 25,000 words — half the NaNoWriMo target), and there’s less pressure to work on a new novel. Not that I was going to let that worry me. I’ll be continuing on with the messy first draft of the current WIP.

Am I sounding as though I’ve already signed up? Er…

At this stage I’m targeting April, although if that happens to coincide with a new dayjob, I’ll consider downscaling the target number of words. But I was planning to tackle something like this anyway, so it seems like the ideal opportunity.

My user name is ellenvgreg and I’m looking for some camp buddies. Seems we get billeted in cabins of 4-6 writers. Who’s going to join me? Leave your NaNo user name in the comments… :-)

 


Being an update on writerly progress

I’ve been getting back into my WIP this week, which is hugely satisfying. After hitting the wall during NaNoWriMo in November, I lost momentum — mainly because December is always crazy with Christmas and the start of summer, and then I was just getting going again in January when… stuff happened.

But I am going to heed Kristen Lamb’s wise words in a recent blog post: “The writer who can focus no matter what else is going on around him is the writer who will succeed long-term. There will always be pets, kids, family, friends, bills, deaths, illness, and drama. We need to learn to work no matter what.”

These words are so true. I can always find an excuse as to why it’s not convenient or practical or even possible to write. If I keep giving into that, I’ll never get anything done.

So, no more excuses. The WIP is back on the table.

It helps, of course, that I’m between jobs at the moment. My aim is to carve out a couple of hours writing time on most days, giving me ample time for job hunting as well.

This past week I’ve found the surest way to carve out writing time is to get out of the house to a cafe. I know I’ve said this before — repeatedly — but gee I love writing in cafes. The whir and hum and smell of the coffee machine. The people-watching. The simple change of location — out and about, rather than chained to the desk all day.

The banishment of the internet to the smartphone.

I’ve been reviewing the 40K odd words I wrote during NaNoWriMo. I printed the chunk out yesterday — the most massive stack of pages. I still can’t believe I wrote all that in less than four weeks. Much of it is even usable… But some of it isn’t, because I need to rework one of the character through-lines before I continue. As a result, I’m making lots of notes and adding/slicing/dicing a few scenes, particularly from the beginning. It’s a slower process than banging out a first draft, but it’s a process I absolutely love and also a great way to get my head back into the story.

And don’t worry, those of you who know my bad habit of rewriting before I’ve finished: I’m not rewriting much. Just a little bit. Promise. Cross my heart and all that.

So that’s where I’m at with the business at hand. Just felt like sharing. As you were.

How are you going with your current project, whatever it may be?

 


The Next Big Thing – My Turn

Finally it is my turn to play The Next Big Thing and I’m a little bit excited.

I was first tagged way back in November by Siri Paulson, but being in the middle of NaNoWriMo at that stage, I put it on hold. Then Sherryl Clark approached me in December and I couldn’t see the harm in being tagged again, since I was planning on doing it anyway. Finally E Markham from Lamellae tagged me last week — and now all the stars have aligned and I am going to answer those ten questions about my Work In Progress . . .

1.   What is the [working] title of your book?

I know some authors need to know what the title is before they start writing, but it’s not so for me. The title is often one of the last things to materialise, and when it does I take this as a sign that the piece is working and nearly complete. So, alas, I don’t have a proper working title at the moment. It’s being referred to as “Adehl’s Story”.

2.   Where did the idea come from for the book?

This book evolved from a rather elaborate piece of backstory I developed for the protagonist of my previous completed manuscript. That novel is currently resting, in part because I received feedback that suggested my elaborate backstory was perhaps more interesting than the actual story I was then working on. Having said that, I had previously thought it might make a good prequel if the other was published . . . but I changed direction and decided to write it as a “book one” instead.

3.   What genre does your book fall under?

Fantasy of the classical kind, set in an imaginary world. It has a little bit of magic and fair amount of politics . . . Not very much blood or sex though, just in case you were wondering. ;-)

4.   What actors would you choose to play the part of your characters in a movie rendition?

Now I wish I was one of those writers who has devoted pages to their characters on Pinterest. But I’m not. I have no idea . . . Hey, it would be pretty exciting to have a movie made of something I wrote, though. I think if it came to that I really wouldn’t care!

5.   What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?

I haven’t perfected this yet, but for now the following will have to do:

Forbidden to wield earth magic when the secret of her lineage is revealed, a young woman risks exile to defy the powerful custodians and fight for justice for her people.

6.   Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?

I don’t have agency representation yet, but that would be my first choice. I’m still idealistic enough to want to be good enough and marketable enough to go the traditional route. However, I’m not ruling out anything for the long term.

7.   How long did it take you to write the first draft of the manuscript?

I’m still working on the first draft, which has taken about 18 months so far. I have a bad tendancy to commence revising before the first draft is finished — a time-wasting habit I’m trying to cure myself of at the moment. The novel itself has somehow exploded into something enormous too, so the revision process should be interesting. I think I’m about two-thirds of the way through.

8.   What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?

I’ve been thinking and thinking about the answer to this and can’t think of anything comparable. That sounds awfully conceited and undoubtedly deluded; but most of the fantasy I read and admire is far more epic and/or sophisticated. This is a story about a woman who finds herself regarded as a notorious rebel, when all she really wanted was to live her own life . . . There are no battles, just a determined defiance with tragic consequences.

9.   Who or what inspired you to write this book?

This seems very similar to question 2, but I’ll take it from a different angle… I spent a ridiculous number of years working on the predecessor to this book, which was the first novel-length manuscript I finished (several times). I came to the realisation that for my growth as a writer I needed to move on and write something new. It was difficult at the time to give up my dogged attempts to perfect a story that had issues, but logically I knew it was the right decision. It took me a while to get excited about a new story with a new set of characters (even though some of them appeared in the earlier book), but it was a step I needed to make! Now I am seriously excited about this story and can’t wait to finish it. (Although I am somewhat daunted by the mountain ahead as well.)

10.   What else about the book might pique the reader’s interest?

At heart, this book is an ideological battle surrounding use of what passes for “magic” in this imaginary world. It pitches a young woman (Adehl) with the wrong lineage against a cult of elitest fundamentalists, as she fights first for the right to wield the energy herself — and then breaks all the rules in a big way to pave the way for others. It doesn’t help her case that Adehl causes one of the elitest fundamentalists, a young man being groomed to a position of power, to defect and take up her cause . . . [Does this pique interest . . . ?]

Now, I tag Mike Schulenberg to next complete the questions.

Thanks for reading — I’d love to hear any feedback . . .

 


2013 is here — let’s get to it!

I am really looking forward to 2013. I have no idea why the arbitrary transition from one year to the next should mean anything, but it does, and I always find myself identifying new challenges and revising goals (once I’m done reflecting on the year that was)…

Often my plans for a new year involve a scrambling attempt to rectify the ‘failings’ of the previous one. But not this year. As 2013 commences I feel invigorated and positive and eager to build upon what ended up a pretty good year. Sure, there were some things that didn’t turn out so well, and I will seek to rectify those, but on the whole it’s onwards and upwards!

On the writing front

My current fantasy WIP has exploded somewhat, and I want to wrestle it back into control for long enough for me to complete a first draft. I don’t know how long this will take, but I want to adopt a regular routine of 3-4 dedicated sessions a week. My calculations suggest that some 6,000 words per week will achieve me around 25,000 words a month, so I should be able to complete the novel within a few months. I daresay it won’t quite happen like that, but let’s see how I go! First I need to get my head back into it after a break in December. And then of course will come the delight — and challenge — of revising.

To support this endeavour, I want to transform my study into an enticing nook instead of a chaotic dumping ground with a desk in the corner. I need a new desk with better ergonomics, a new chair, and probably a new computer too. This will no doubt take a little while… But ultimately, I want to want to go sit at my desk, instead of succumbing to the laptop on the sofa (where the TV is an evil distraction).

Social media

I really enjoyed developing this blog in 2012, and I hope to improve it even further this year. In addition, I’m gearing myself up for a foray into a couple more (hitherto unvisited by me) social media sites — pinterest and Goodreads. Not that I have any extra time, you understand. But I keep hearing about them, and I’m convinced I’m missing out on something amazing…

The Goodreads angle does of course key in with the sentiments expressed in my previous post. I must read more this year!

Extra-curricular activities

During 2012 I swept aside  most non-family-related extra-curricular activities with the view to prioritising my writing ‘second career’. However, it has been borne upon me more than once that one needs to refill the creative well. It’s not actually healthy (or especially productive) to sit in front of a computer all the time, so this year I want to get away from the desk a bit more — whether day trips out of town, craft workshops, that choir I mentioned a week ago, etc.

World Fantasy 2013

This last is more of a statement than a ‘resolution’, but I’m very excited to be attending the World Fantasy Convention in Brighton UK in late October/early November. In view of potential industry networking opportunities at this event (of the type that are much more tricky from Australia), there are certain novel milestones I’d like to achieve by then, but I’m not going to get obsessed about them.

I want to feel good about what I’m doing this year — maintain the joy, not get stressed about what isn’t happening, focus on what I have to do not what others are doing… I’m going to continue with the ‘Anne of Green Gables’ principle of Tomorrow is a new day with no mistakes in it, and try to ‘run my own race’.

OK, that’s enough self-absorbed contemplation. Thanks for bearing with me!

2013 is here — let’s get to it!

 


Recap on a year of Word Wrangling

Last year I made a single New Year’s Resolution: finish a first draft of the novel I’ve been working on.

Hmm.

I did make substantial progress on it though. In fact I’m fairly certain I wrote the most number of words I’ve ever achieved in a calendar year. So, although I didn’t precisely finish it, I still consider 2012 to be a good and productive year.

It began with a change in mindset for me. I decided to treat my writing as a second career. For years I’d been designating it as a ‘hobby’ — hiding behind this terminology as far as inquisitive friends and family went. Using it as an excuse for never finishing anything, not being published. But in 2012 I acknowledged that in order to progress I needed to take myself more seriously.

Part of this involved rediscovering the joy of writing. Although I took a break from the dayjob for most of 2011, my writing mojo abandoned me and it took quite a lot of 2012 to get it back. I spent the first half of the year determinedly trying to achieve modest word goals, yet not impressed with anything I was writing. And then I realised something important was missing.

Eventually, after much soul searching, I finally felt the thrill in the pit of my stomach and rediscovered the joy of my WIP. Around this time I also began regularly writing in a local cafe with a friend, which has been one of the highlights of my year.

All this propelled me into such a positive mindset that I tackled November’s NaNoWriMo challenge — something I never thought I’d dare attempt. And although I didn’t quite make it to the 50K, I impressed myself. My first draft is now well progressed — would be nearly complete if it wasn’t starting to look so big — and maybe I’ll complete it this year. ;)

On top of all this word wrangling on my WIP, I devoted a lot of time and effort to networking with other writers via social media and blogging. This has been immensely rewarding, and I’ve learnt a great deal about blogging. In addition, I have made so many online friends — many of whom read and comment here regularly. Thank you!

In writing this I’ve been looking over the posts I’ve written in the past year and thought I would recap some of my favourites from earlier in 2012:

Every year is a different journey and 2012 was no exception. It was an extremely busy year, during which I frequently wished for one of Hermione Granger’s time-turners, but somehow I’ve made it through with a smile on my face. Bring on 2013!

 


And that’s a NaNoWriMo wrap

Well, that was an experience. My first NaNoWriMo. I didn’t quite make it to the end, but I did give it a red hot go for 25 days out of 30 and achieved 41, 750 words.

This (aside from the fact I didn’t achieve the ultimate goal of 50K) is a wonderful thing. It’s certainly more words than I’ve produced in a month before, and although it hasn’t brought me to the end of the story, I’m definitely a whole lot closer.

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Where NaNo worked for me

I’m someone who responds to tracking and accountability. Entering my daily word-count into the NaNo web site, examining my statistics, and keeping track of my fellow writing buddies’ progress was all the incentive I needed. That and a desire to ‘win’ a challenge.

NaNoWriMo gave me the framework I needed to be more disciplined than normal. I wrote when I didn’t feel like it (mostly). I wrote on the evenings when all I wanted to do was watch TV, or read a book. I even wrote late in the evenings after I’d been out — and in the hair salon. I had my word quota to reach, dammit! There were a couple of days when I gave myself a break, but those were all factored in.

As for the whole ‘dismiss your inner editor’ aspect of NaNoWriMo… I found this liberating in some ways. I tried to adopt the attitude that it didn’t matter how the words came out, that all that mattered was the story itself. And even if the story went off the rails a little, which it did from time to time, I could just ignore the bits that hadn’t worked and recalibrate in the next scene. This helped me keep ploughing ahead without going back to rewrite and edit… a somewhat alien concept for me.

Where it didn’t work so well

The hardest thing about NaNoWriMo for me was coming up with scene after scene after scene… As I said in an earlier post, I usually take a little longer to mull over what specifically should happen next. The relentless pace of NaNoWriMo really challenged me in this regard, and was ultimately what defeated me in the end: Last Sunday I reached a point in the story where I felt I needed to start pulling all the strands together to work up to the climax — and for that I needed (need!) reflection time.

Maybe I could have gone on anyway, just to see what my subconscious dragged up. Maybe I could have gone back to insert some scenes from other POV characters I’ve been skimming over… Maybe.

But I didn’t. I just felt I needed to stop, think, mull. Ah well, nearly 42K words is not so bad!

Would I do it again?

Whether or not I officially participate in NaNoWriMo again, I might very well tackle something similar on my own terms. It’s certainly been effective for me, at least while I’m embracing this ‘rough first draft’ philosophy… It’s not something to be undertaken all the time, but for pounding out that rough first draft it’s been good — up to a point.

But maybe it’s enough to know that I can force the wordslinging upon myself for a week or two at a time, and in future I can take it from there. It’s certainly given me a new process to consider. Perhaps going forward I can set myself timelines that might have once seemed unrealistic, but which now are achievable through adopting some of these new found techniques.

When it comes to redrafting and editing though, that’ll be a whole new ball game. That’s when the novel will truly begin to come alive, and that’s what will take all the time.

And that’s actually the part I am looking forward to. I think there are two fundamental kinds of authors: 1) those who feel the thrill of raw storytelling, who love discovering what happens and therefore love the first-draft process and the editing not so much; 2) those who feel the thrill of making a story come to life, through the perfect balance of setting, emotion, character, conflict etc, and therefore live for redrafting, editing and polishing.

I’m the latter. Definitely.

So in that respect, NaNoWriMo could be considered a damn good thing to force me through that first draft process!


NaNoWriMo sanity check

This is just going to be a quick update of where I’m at with stuff (aka NaNoWriMo sanity check).

The most excellent news is that I’m still on schedule to complete the 50K in 30 days and sailed past 35K this evening. There was a mini meltdown on Monday evening, when the pressure of producing so many damn words got to me and I could feel myself getting worked up. So I took myself off to bed with a trashy novel. That did the trick and the next day I was back.

The thing I am finding most challenging is coming up with so much story in such a short amount of time. Clearly I need practice at this! In the past, my slow-burn writing process has provided plenty of thinking and mulling time. I’ve been able to carefully consider where the story should head next, then carefully consider the words used to go there. Not so with NaNoWriMo and this new ‘rough first draft’ I’m attempting. Every night is a new scene and I have to figure out what’s going to happen. Ack!

The thing that got me on Monday night was the completion of a major turning point on Sunday, which meant I not only had to figure out the next scene, I had to figure out where the entire novel needed to go. This sort of thing can take me hours of mulling and brainstorming… which meant of course I didn’t actually have any time left to write, what with the dayjob and all.

But all is good. I figured it out the next day and am back on track again — words-wise, that is. The quality of the story itself remains to be seen. But I think it’s going in the right direction, which is the main thing. There will be much rewriting in the new year. Definitely.

That’s all I wanted to say at this stage, really. There are just 9 days to go, and in many ways that seems like an eternity. Yet at the same time it’s hard to believe I’ve been at this for 21 days already! The time has really flown.

Because it’s Wednesday, and I’m supposed to present my inspiration of the week, I’m going to include it here at the end. And this is the thing that has kept me going for the past 21 days: my writing community — including both my local writing group, my online wana facebook group, and any other writers who happen to stumble upon my blog and say hello. You guys are all awesome! (And for those non-writers reading this, your support matters a lot too!)

 


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